krótkie zad z angielskiego kto sprawdzi ?

Dear Editor! I'm writing with Marta D to response to you article "Why TV is bad for us?" In my opinion Tv encourage us to by lazy, because when we are watching TV we don't do anything else. TV is showing us the violence only and stoping as from using our brains. We forgoten about everything, especially about our problems Treść zadania : You have just read a newspaper article called Why TV is bad for us. Write a formal letter to the editor. Use Train Your Brain and the text in Exercise 1 to help you . Give you opinions on these points. - TV encourages us to be lazy - It often gives us a trivial version of the news - We don't use our brains when we watch TV - TV teaches young people that violence is always the best answer

Zaczynając od początku : Co ma znaczyć stwierdzenie "i'm writing with Marta D"? List formalny tego typu powinien się zaczynać tak: Dear Editor I'm writing in response to the article published in the recent issue of your paper, entitled "Why TV is bad for us?"(jesteś pewna , że tam nie było :"why is tv bad for us?")

tak sprawdzilam ,, Why TV is bad foru us " jak mogę ten list zakończyć ? nauczyciel mowil, że może on być krotki :)