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Dobrze napisałam? Jeżeli mam błędy to proszę o poprawienie. My name is xxx.Im 19 years old. I live with my boyfriend in a small village near xxx. I work on week days but I learn every weekend in secondary school. In the past I learned in Hotel Technical School. I have not enough time for amenities like walking in the forest and meeting with my friends. I spend a lot of time on learning. I have no special interests, once I collected postal stamps but I don't do it now. Now I'm doing everything that I have time to do. Generally I like to listen a music - like most of us. In the evenings I'm watching TV or reading a book. Also I like going to the cinema or theatre. I like to travel very much. I'm always dreaming about a journey to the Majorka Island by the plane, but my boyfriend opposite this idea. He thinks that traveling on the plane is very dangerous, but I'm not afraid to fly by plane, I like challenges. In my life the most important is family and friends. They stand by me each moment. I feel that I would able to get around without them in hard moments. I don't like to be alone when I'm not have people to conversations. I'm afraid of darkness. I'm getting sleep only when light is turn on. Generally i don't like talk a lot about me, I like to listen Rother people when they talk about them.

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I work from Monday to Friday because I attend secondary school every weekend. Ja bym napisala Technical College I haven't got enough time for activities such as walking..... Now I do whatever I want, of course if I have free time. Generally, I like to listen to music- In the evening I watch TV or I read a book. I like going to the theatre. I dream about a journey to the Majorka Island by a plane, but my boyfriend doesn't like this idea. Traveling by a plane I'M NOT AFRAID OF FLYING BY PLANE. In my life the most important thing is my family and friends. I feel that I would not be able to cope with my problems without their companion- tak bedzie ładniej :) I don't like to be alone when I don't have anyone to talk with. I fall asleep only when the ligh is turned on. I don't like talking about myself. I like to listen to other people when they talk about themsleves

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