angielski,prośba o sprawdzenie błędów

bardzo proszę osoby biegłe w angolu o sprawdzenie czy ten dialog jest ok gramatycznie i stylistycznie. Ewentualnie co powinnam poprawic. 1 Hello Ms..... 2 Hello 1 My name is .... and I have a good idea I think,I have found a good way to make money. I need some cash to start small bussines. 2 You should go to the bank to get a loan 1 Yes,indeed,but I do not have enough time, I want to act now. 2 Ok,so what is the idea? 1 it is very simple, I want to make a restaurant for truckers, I have found a good place,It is localised on the 56 route , near the Koszalin city. I talk with the owner of the land ,he can lease it to me for six mounth of start.Truck drivers must rest and they will stop for meal and sleep at my parking site. 2 Sounds great,How much does it cost? 1 It cost a 50.000 2 A lot of money. What guarantee have you got that this bussines will work end you earn money? 1 I did some research Everything is ready. If I start now,the idea becomes succes.All I need is money. Will yoy borrow it to me? 2 Why not,but you must hold on. I must go to the bank and take money. Please come tommorow.

bardzo proszę,potrzebuje to na jutro,jesli ktos bylby tak mily to bylabym wdzieczna

I want to make a restaurant for truckers - I want to start a restaurant for truck drivers I have found a good place,It is localised on the 56 route - I found..., it is located by... I talk with the - I spoke with the he can lease it to me for six mounth of start - initially we have agreed he can lease it for me for period of six months It cost a 50.000 - is costs 50.000 guarantee have you got that this bussines will work end you earn money - what guarantee do you have this business will be profitable I must go to the - I need to go to the bank Please come tommorow - Please come back tommorow To mi wpadło w oko, ale ogólnie widzę, że ogarniasz temat i powidzenia z tirowcami :D

dzięki wielkie :)