angielski - czy ktos pomoze? letter of complaint

czy ktoś mógłby sprawdzić, czy dobrze napisałam Letter od Complaint ? z góry dziękuję. :) Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with an order i placed two months ago. I had ordered two books in your bookstore. "Postscriptum" written by Helen Schulman which has got number 28/2012 and "Jedenaście minut" by Paulo Coelho number 22/6562. When I received it, I saw that the books were completely demaged. They had dog-eared corners and the letters were erased. Futhermore, the achievement of an order took up two months and, because od that, I had a problem in my job. It was very stressful for me and my family. Such a delay seems to me inexcusable. I do not want to retain your books and I insist upon full compensation or I will be forced to take this matter further. I look forward to receiving for reply. Yours faithfully, XYZ.

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This letter is to inform you how dissatisfied I am with an order I placed two months ago. I had ordered two books in your bookstore. \"Postscriptum\" written by Helen Schulman - item #28/2012 and \"Jedenaście minut\" by Paulo Coelho - item # 22/6562. When I received my order, I saw that the books were completely damaged. They had dog-eared corners and the letters were erased. Furthermore, the delivery time excited two months and because of that, I had a problem in my work. It was very stressful for me and my family. Such a delay seems to me unacceptable. I do not want to retain your books and I insist upon full compensation of costs or I will be forced to take this matter further. Thank you for your help and respond in the reasonable time frame. Please contact me at ___________ to arrange money reimbursement Sincerely, XYZ. moze tak

zapomnialam To whom it may concern : nie dear sir or madam

moglabys mi powiedziec co to znaczy I say come on baby turn the lights off ??

mowie, choc( no dalej) dziecinko i wylacz swiatlo

matko CHODZ nie choc - przepraszam

dzieki serdeczne swinkowaaa :) poprawilam kilka rzeczy, ale ten poczatek i koniec zostawie, bo wiem, ze to napewno jest dobrze (wzielam z ksiazki) ale dzieki Ci jeszcze raz :*

nie ma sprawy, jak chcesz zostawic tak jak tam masz, to popraw z receiving for reply na receiving YOUR replay

ok :) a czy slowo "ESCITED" jest napewno dobrze tu dobrane "the delivery time excited two months " ?

ok :) a czy slowo "ESCITED" jest napewno dobrze tu dobrane "the delivery time excited two months " ?

ok :) a czy EXCITED napewno jest dobrze?

ok :) a czy EXCITED napewno jest dobrze?

oczywiscie , ze nie exceeded - tak to jest z ludzmi w pracy , nie mysla totalnie co pisza :)

:)) dziekuje bardzo jeszcze raz

to lights off :) a moglabys jeszcze to?? cause it's getting late I say I know you're gonna try to enter you shouldn't hesitate you had a wounded heart eyes across a crowded room bardzo bede wdzieczna :)