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Someday I was sleeping in Klaudia\'s home. We were alone because her parents had gone at the seaside. When we were watching a horror, we heard strong beat. We ran quickly to the balcoony and we saw a cloud of smoke getting out of near flat. After it provea television-set had broken out.

WYDAJE mi sie ze dobrze...choc pewna nie jestem

Someday I was sleeping in Klaudia's home. We were alone because her parents had gone at the seaside. When we were watching a horror, we heard strong beat. We ran quickly to the balcoony and we saw a cloud of smoke getting out of near flat. After it provea television-set had broken out. One day I was sleeping at Klaudia's home. We were alone because her parents had gone at the seaside. When we were watching a horror movie, we've heard a noise. We got quickly to the balcony and we notice a cloud of smoke getting out of next flat. Nie wiem ocb z ostanim zdaniem.

one night a nie one day:)

W ostatnim zdaniu chciałam napisać \"okazało się potem, że wybuchł telewizor\"

One night I was sleeping at Klaudia's home. We were alone because her parents had gone to the seaside. When we were watching a horror movie, we heard a noise. We had gone quickly to the balcony and we noticed a cloud of smoke getting out of the flat that was close to our. After that it turned out that TV had exploded.

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Dlaczego zawsze do pomocy rzucają się matoły językowe poprawiające z błędami? Co wam to daje? Poprawiacie sobie samopoczucie w ten sposób?

po pierwsze at home a nie in

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