do osob znajacych troche angielski

jezeli bylby ktos tak mily i sprawdzil ten krotki tekst i wskazal bledy bede wdzieczna pzdr:)))) Today Maria has a birthday celebration. Ther are six people in the room. Everyone is having a good time. The guests are talking,one girls is singing and one boy is playing at the guitar. Maria's room is not very spacious. Ther is a big window. Near the window in the left corner of the room is standing a desk. On the desk there is birthday cake.

Near the window in the left corner of the room is standing a desk. On the desk there is birthday cake. There is standing desk in the left corner of the room near the window.There is birthday cake on the desk

albo there is desk albo tehe standing desk, on the desk teher is A birthday cake na poczatku jest ther, ale mysle, ze przypadkiem polknelas e, ale dalej jest one girls is singing - jesli kilka dziewczyn spiewa to some girls are singing, jesli jedna to one girl (bez s na koncu)

dzieki i pzdr:)))

Tak powinno byc: Today Maria has a birthday celebration. Ther are six people in the room. Everyone is having a good time. The guests are talking. One girl is singing and one boy is playing the guitar. Maria's room is not very spacious. Ther is a big window. Near the window in the left corner there is a desk. On the desk there is a birthday cake.

There are six people in the room :0)

There is.....

There is a big window jest zjedzone literka E :) nak końcu

faktycznie, nawet tego nei zauwazylam. A do tego powinno byc There are six people in a room. Zamiast the room -> a room - bo po raz pierwszy o tym mowimy

she 83 dobrze mialas the room - bo pierwszy raz sie p"przedstawia" cos przedrostkiem the

ehhhh... nigdy nie stosuje sie 'the' kiedy mowimy o czyms pierwszy raz - wbic sobie to do glowy. A jak nie pomoze to do nauczyciela angielskiego sie zglosic i powiedziec zeby pomogl. Kiedy mowimy o czyms pierwszy raz stosujemy 'a' lub 'an' w zaleznosci czy wyraz zaczyna sie na samogloske czy spolgloske i oczywiscie w l.poj., nigdy inaczej