Mozecie mi pomoc? 2 teksty po angielsku do sprawdzenia

Hi Jane! 1. I'm writing to you from France. I'm on a trip with my friend Mary. Now we are in Paris. We are staying at two-star hotel. We have here a swimming pool and a jacuzzi. We are having a great time! Yesterday we were on the Eiffel Tower. It is so tall that we could see whole Paris from there. France is so exciting place. We have already learned some french words. We wish stay here forever but we have to go back to Poland this Friday. We must meet when I'm back. I have so much to tell you. Loves XYZ 2. Dear Sir! When I browsed a newspaper with my friend We found advertisement for an apartment on the Rochester St. 5, which can be rented. So I have a few questions about this home. Namely, I would like what are the fees for this apartment, if the fees are monthly or weekly, and how much they are, please tell me whether the apartment is furnished, or have any equipment. We would keep a dog so there arises another question, whether in the home can have pets? A dog is man best friend and would like to keep him with us. We would like to live in this area because it is there are good transport links, it would be useful in the access routes to school. I would like to agree on a date in which I could see the apartment, and the date of removal. I hope for a quick response. You Sincerely: XYZ Bede bardzo wdzieczna za poprawienie bledow. Pozdrawiam

nie fee tylko rent ! nie home a property! reszty nie chce mi sie juz pisac, ale z gramą jest momentami dosyc kiepsko....