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Kto mi poprawi błędy w liście? Dera Sir or Madam I'm writing to apply for the position of working with children for council summer camps, which was advertised in last Friday's newspaper. I have considerable experience of work with children. Last year I worked for eight mont in holiday cam and I worked for nine months in school with small children. My responsibilites there included work with children as well as organising part time and playing sports. I consider myself to be a relaible, hard-working,fit and I love work with children. If necessary I can supply a reference from the organisator on holiday camp where I working at present. I would be very grateful for the oportunity to visit the organisator of summer camp and discuss my application with you in person. I am available for interview and day after school or on Saturdays. If my application is successful I will be available to start work on 24 July, immediately after my exams I am enclosing my CV I look forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully XYZ

na koncu pisze sie przyjazny zwrot tu masz dwa do wyboru : oj lont drink som kum end lick jor fet es albo jezeli piszesz oficjalnie o prace giv mi dżob i giv you maj pusi

Dear Sir or Miss I'm writing to apply for the position of working with children for council summer camps, which was advertised in last Friday's newspaper. I have considerable experience of work with children. Last year I worked for eight months in holiday cam and I worked for nine months in school with small children. My responsibilites there included work with children as well as organising part time and playing sports. I consider myself to be a relaible, hard-working,fit and I love work with children. If necessary I can supply a reference from the organisator on holiday camp where I working at present. I would be very grateful for the oportunity to visit the organisator of summer camp and discuss my application with you in person. I am available for interview and day after school or on Saturdays. If my application is successful I will be available to start work on 24 July, immediately after my exams I am enclosing my CV I look forward to hearing from you soon Yours sincerly XYZ

sa literowki nawet zwykle, jak ci sie nie chce przylozyc i nawet tego dobrze przepisac to ktos ci ma to cale poprawiac?

in reply to your advertisement in fridays newspeper i would like to apply for position....

Wszystko jest źle?:(

moim zdanem tak.. moge niestety pominac kilka bledow.. Dear Sir/Madam I'm writing to apply for the position of working with children for council summer camps, which was advertised in the last Friday's newspaper. I have considerable experience of working with children. Last year I was working for eight months in holiday camp. I was also working at school with small children for nine months. My responsibilites there included working with children as well as organising part time(???) and playing sports with them. Być kobietą to strasznie trudne zajęcie, bo polega głównie na zadawaniu się z mężczyznami.

moim zdanem tak.. moge niestety pominac kilka bledow.. Dear Sir/Madam I'm writing to apply for the position of working with children for council summer camps, which was advertised in the last Friday's newspaper. I have considerable experience of working with children. Last year I was working for eight months in holiday camp. I was also working at school with small children for nine months. My responsibilites there included working with children as well as organising part time(???) and playing sports with them.

moim zdanem tak.. moge niestety pominac kilka bledow.. Dear Sir/Madam I'm writing to apply for the position of working with children for council summer camps, which was advertised in the last Friday's newspaper. I have considerable experience of working with children. Last year I was working for eight months in holiday camp. I was also working at school with small children for nine months. My responsibilites there included working with children as well as organising part time(???) and playing sports with them.

I consider myself as reliable, hard-working and fit. I love working with children. If necessary I can supply a reference from the organisator of holiday camp where I'm working at the present. I would be very grateful for the oportunity to visit the organisator of summer camp and discuss my application with you in person. I am available for the interview everyday after school or on Saturdays. If my application is successful I will be available to start work on 24th of July, immediately after my exams. I'm enclosing my CV. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, XYZ

My responsibilites there included working with children as well as organising part time(???) and playing sports with them. a to zdanie nie ma sensu i nie rozumiem chcialas napisac..