POMOCY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;(

NApisałam list na angielski ale nie wiem czy jest poprawnie napisany.. czy mógłby mi ktos pomóc i poprawić błędy.. z góry dziekuje I'm student.when I read your article in the newspaper,I decided to immediately write you a letter. I Thnikt thah you should not close the cinema ,because the cinema is a good place for entertainment.People have a lot of free time like to go to the cinema to see a good move. Rental is not a goodidea beacuse not everyone has home player to be able to watch a move at home. I proposed to organise a meeting for the closure of cinema,and find out we other they are ehind this that cinema was been closed.I encounage all. XYZ