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The problem of quarrels between parents and children has been existing sine the beginning of human kind. This problem is known to everybody. Quarrelling between parents and children is so frequent because there is a huge difference of age between them and consequently they have different opinions about most of the things. First of all, many conflicts in our families are the results of generation gap, which causes lack of cooperating between parents and children. The effect of this is a bad atmosphere in family. Parents and children often ignore and do not talk each other and do not share their problems. Adults do not help their children and devote to little time to them because they have their own matters-then the young feel superfluous and neglected. Next, Parents interference in childrens life causes that young people do not trust parents. Children should have right to decide about their own live and should make their own choices which lead them to become happier. Growing up people want to be more independent but adults prohibit them doing many things: they do not let them go out, wear the clothes they like. Young do not want to be still under control-adults make choices for them, solve their problems, choose a career path themselves. As a result teenagers fight for their rights and demonstrate their rebellion thorough to play truant and sometimes from reality and begin drink a lot of alcohol or smoke cigarettes. Finally, parents control money and give children too little money than they want to, which causes that children steal. Young people who steal, may have problems with low, which may cause having troubles in finding a job in the coming future. To sum up, argument is a very common phenomenon in our life. It is something that has always arisen and will arise between children and their parents.