J. ANGIELSKI PROSZĘ O POMOC

Poprawcie moje błedy, zdania lub słowa których szczególnie nie jestem pewna napisałam drukowanymi. I jak możecie to pomóżcie mi sklecić jeszcze jakieś 3 zdania (w zadaniu ma znaczenie ilość użytych słów) Będę wdzięczna Hello Mary. Thank you for your letter and photo. I' m SEND you a picture of my family. My family is not big. We are in the garden party. In the middle of the picture is me, on my right STANDING is my mom. Next to her STANDING my dad. Thats' s my brother, Marcin, next to the barbecue. That' s my two cousins Magda and Ala. Magda is the one in red dress. That' smy uncle Heniek, betwin Magda and Ala. That' s my sister Basia, behind my mom. Basia has 30 years old. She has black long hair and blue eyes. She work in hospital, her job is very responsibility. She SAVES HUMAN LIFE. She very likes this job. Barbara married fantastic men, Tadeusz. THEY waiting for A baby. I REALLY HAPPY I' VE BEEN AUNT. I hope you like my picture and I waiting for a letter from you.

my mom is standing is my dad between basia is 30 she works responsible i'm really happy that i'll be that you like i'm waiting pisałam po kolei,możliwe że coś pominełam

czyli poprawnie ma być tak? on my right my mom is standing czy my mom is standing on my right ?? i'm really happy that i'll be aunt?? i hope that you like my picture and I'm waiting for letter from you?? A dodacie jeszcze jakieś 3 zdania?? prosze pomóżcie mi bo jestem słaba z angola :(

Hello Mary. Thank you for your letter and the photo. I' m sending you a picture of my family. My family is not big. We are in the garden and we have a party. In the middle of the picture there is me, my mom is standing on my right. My dad is standing next to her. Thats' s my brother, Marcin, next to the barbecue. These are my two cousins Magda and Ala. Magda is the one in a red dress. That' s my uncle Heniek, between Magda and Ala. That' s my sister Basia, behind my mom. Basia is 30 years old. She has got long, black hair and blue eyes. She works in a hospital, her job is very responsible. She SAVES HUMAN LIFE. She very likes this job. Barbara married a fantastic man, Tadeusz. THEY are expecting A baby. I will be REALLY HAPPY when I become an AUNT. I hope you like my picture and I'm waiting for a letter from you.

ta pierwsza wersja i jeszcze ma być they are waiting pod koniec tego możesz napisać jeszcze coś w stylu how are you? Couse i'm fine and i have grat time in barcelona with my family. This is grat place. Anyway, thank you for... etc

Na początku Thanks a nie thank :) i'm really happy that i'll be aunt

I'm sending at the garden party I'm in the middle of my mom is standing on my right she likes her job very much man They are expacting a baby an aunt

dziękuje bardzo, możecie jeszcze przetłumaczyć mi to => Moja siostra kiedy ma wolne dużo podróżuje ze swoim mężem. Zawsze przywożą mi fantastyczne pamiątki. Być może kiedyś wybiorę sie z nimi w podróż. Kończę list. Na zdjęciu są także moje dwa psy -Reksiu i Suzi.