E-mail ANG, proszę o sprawdzenie błędów...

Nie chodzi o jakieś rozbudowywanie zdań. maja być banalne. chodzi o błedy, ponieważ niektórych zwrotów nie jestem pewna. Dear Rob How are you? How do you feel? I would like to tell you about my new electronic gadget. I bought an electronic organizer. I can save information about my friends birthday. I can write notes and I can save information about my meetings. I use my electronic organizer every day. I use this organizer in school, in my house and in my job. This is fantastic. I bought an electronic organizer a month ago in a computer shop ,,Games,,. This shop is situated near my school. I am very satisfied that I have this gadget. If you want I can buy the same organizer. What do you think? Cant wait to hear from you. Please, write to me. Bye! XYZ

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I can save information about my friends' birthday. Tutaj po "friends" musi być apostrof ;) I use this organizer at school. At, nie in ;) If you want I can buy the same organizer for you. I tak jest okej :)

dzięki;)

in my job- zamiast tego lepiej by bylo "at my work"

"this shop is situated close my home" zamiast "near" moze byc "close", anglicy czesniej tego slowa uzywaja w tym znaczeniu

this shop is situated close my school * sorki :P

I am very satisfied that I possess this gadget. "possess" bedzie lepsze niz "have " :)

a nawet OWN zamiast POSSESS poza tym organiSer, jesli ma to byc brytyjski angielski information about my friends' birthdays I use this organiser at school, at home and at work. If you want I can buy you the same organiser.

"If you want I can buy the same organizer. What do you think about this idea ?" "Cant wait to hear from you. Please, write to me." -nie rozumiem zabardzo co chialas tutaj powiedziec :P to zdanie jest zle, ale powiedz mi po polsku co chcialas napisac

If u want, I can buy the same organiser for u. "

sorku u=you to tak z przyzwyczajenia :P

"I cant wait for your ....reply" np"reply" I cant wait for....." i tu sobei wpiszco tam chcesz.