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mógłby mi ktos WYKWALIFIKOWANY poprawic ten tekst?? nie chodzi tylko o błędy merytoryczne ale tez o interpunkcje, składnie itp The success C of Debi Thomas Debi Thomas according to Sports Illustrated is the first Black ice skater to win a senior national championship. She interest in skating began when she was only three years old and her mother took her to the Ice Capades. She became very excited during the show. As a result she begged her mother for a pair of skates. Although she became an excellent skater as a child, but she didnt win any competitions until she was 12. Because she was determinating to become a great skater P she quit school in the 8th grade in order to be able to spend all her time training. But in her competition, she only took 4th place. Dissapointing in her performance, she decided to go back to school. If she couldnt succeed as a skater, at least SF could still work hard for a good education. For four years in high school she studied hard all day and then every day after school spent hours training for figure skating competitions. Her big chance came in 1985-86. First she was accepted at Stanford university as a medical microbiology major which was one of the most difficult majors at the university. Next her hard work in the skating rink was finally rewarded when in 1986 she won the U.s Senior Ladies Figure Skating Championships. As she pursues her study in biochemistry microbiological and immunology in order to become an orthopedic surgeon specialize in sports medicine, Debi remains confident I can do whatever I set my mind to do.