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My name is Partyk. I have twenty years old. In my family are five people and my dog. We live in a big house in Wrocław. I've got a younger brother and sister.I walk to the weekend school. My sister is studying and brother is pupil in a high schooll. I often go to the body buildig gym and I playing volleyball. My parents are hard-working. They are not ofen in home. In free time we travel to Poland. What is more, we very like spending time together. Z góry dziękuję i zaznaczam, że jestem początkujący a gramatyka jest mi obca. Pozdrawiam.

My name is Partyka. I am 20 years old. There are five people and one dog in my family. We live in a big house in Wroclaw. I've got one younger brother and one younger sister. I go to a weekend school. My sister is a (university?)student and brother a high school pupil. I often go to the body-building gym and play volleyball. Both my parents work hard and are seldom at home. In our free time we travel around Poland (jesli mieszkasz we Wroclawiu to podrozujesz po Polsce a nie do Polski zakladam?). Furthermore we do like to spend time together.

Dzięki wielkie. Tak moja tępota z angielskiego jest powalająca, ale może mi się uda kiedyś ogarnąć ten język.

hello, my name is Patryk. I am twenty years old. there is five people in my family and one dog. We live in Wroclaw in a big house. I have younger brother and sister. I am attending to the weekend school. My sister is studying and my brother is a pupil in a high school. I usually go to the Gym and I am playing netball. My parents are not in the house so often because they are hard workers. When we have free time we like traveling to Poland and we like spendint lots of time together.