czy ktoś z was potrafi dobrze angielski? mały problem..

mam napisać krótko o swoich celach po obecnej szkole, i nie jestem pewna czy wszystko jest poprawnie napisane.. Gdyby ktoś z was był tak dobry, i poświęcił minutke na przeczytanie krótkiego tekstu, i napisanie w komentarzu czy jest poprawnie, i ewentualnie pokazać błedy... I am ambitious person with a lot goals for the future. The most important for me, on this moment is to successfully finish studies in MMD. I want to keep hard work, grow, and learn new things. After studies I will grow my education, as long as I will need to be financially succesful. But, I think, self- education is something, I will keep doing for the rest of my life. I want to choose what I do, instead of being pushed along by life,and at the end of my life to be able to look back on my life as meaningful and complete. Z góry bardzo dziekuje!!

napisze jeszcze raz w komentarzu bo tam nie zrobilam odstepu i bedzie sie kiepsko czytac... I am ambitious person with a lot goals for the future. The most important for me, on this moment is to successfully finish studies in MMD. I want to keep hard work, grow, and learn new things. After studies I will grow my education, as long as I will need to be financially succesful. But, I think, self- education is something, I will keep doing for the rest of my life. I want to choose what I do, instead of being pushed along by life,and at the end of my life to be able to look back on my life as meaningful and complete.

nie wiem do czego Ty to chcesz dolaczyc ale brzmi naprawde zle.

mam napisac krotko o swoich celach, ktore lacza sie z obecna szkola, jest zle gramatycznie?

bo nie jestem zbyt dobra z anglika, i nie wiem czy stylistyka jest zla, czy gramatyka, gdzie powinnam poprawic, a czego w ogole nie pisac...

to jak, pomoze ktos? bo nie mam nawet kogo poprosic o pomoc..

zmienilam troche i teraz to wyglada tak:

Nie jest zle, ale niektore rzeczy inaczej bym napisala... Moze napisz po polsku to Ci przetlumacze, ale orlem tez nie jestem ... :)

I am ambitious person with a lot goals for the future. The most important for me, on this moment is to successfully finish studies in MMD. I want to keep hard work, grow, and learn new things. After studies I will grow my education, as long as it will be possible. But, I think, self- education is something, I will keep doing for the rest of my life. I want to choose what I do, instead of being pushed along by life,and at the end of my life to be able to look back on my life as meaningful and complete.

I am an ambitious person with a lot goals for the future. My priority at the moment is to successfully finish my studies at MMD. I want to keep up the hard work, develop, and learn new things. After studies I will enrich my education for as long as required to be financially succesful. According to me, self- education is something that I will continue for the rest of my life. I want to choose what I do, instead of being pushed along by life, and at the end of my life I'd like to be able to see it meaningful and complete.

see it as meaningful and complete*

w sumie chodzi mi tylko o to zeby napisac o tym ze mam cele na przyszlosc, najwazniejszy z nich jest pomyslne ukonczenie obecnej szkoly, w miedzy czasie chce zachowac ciezka prace, rozwijac sie, i uczyc nowych rzeczy. Po tej szkole chcialabym kontynulowac nauke tak dlugo az bede czula sie 'spelniona' no i chce robic w zyciu to co naprawde chce, a nie po prostu zyc 'z dnia na dzien' zeby pozniej, jak bede stara spojrzec na swoje zycie jako wartosciowe :) po polsku chyba gorzej napisalam niz po ang, haha :)

inaczej: I am an ambitious person with a lot of goals for the future. My priority at the moment is to successfully finish my studies at MMD. I want to keep up the hard work, develop, and learn new things. After graduation I intend to enrich my education for as long as I need to be financially stable. I believe that education is something that I will continue for the rest of my life. I want to choose what I do, rather than being pushed along by life, and at the end of my life I'd like to be able to see it as meaningful and complete.

DZIEKUJE OSOBIE WYZEJ ZA POMOC. Tylko pytanie, to jest na 100% dobrze, czy wymaga jeszcze malych poprawek?:)

Spoko, nie ma sprawy. Przeczytam to co napisalam jeszcze ze 3 razy i zrobie male kosmetyczne poprawki- daj mi z 5 minut.

No moja pomoc jest juz zbedna, tekst jest teraz perfect ;)

dziekuje bardzo, jestes Aniolem! :)

I am an ambitious person with many goals for the future. My priority at the moment is to successfully finish my studies at MMD. I want to keep up the hard work, develop my existing knowledge, and learn new things. After graduation I intend to pursue my education for as long as I need to be financially succesful. I believe that I will continue learning for the rest of my life, because I want to be able to choose what I do, rather than living a tedious day-to-day life. By the time I grow old, I would like to look back at my life and see it as meaningful and complete. Voila!

Popraw ... My priority at the moment is to successfully finish my studies at MMD.

Nie ma sprawy, mam nadzieje ze dostanę dobrą ocenę ;) Daj znać!

DZIEKUJE BARDZO, dzieki Tobie sie nie osmiesze :)))

Nie ma problemu. Daj znac jak poszlo, dodam se temat do ulubionych. Haha :)

After studies I will enrich my education ... After studies I"ll imrove my education...

j.obcy... , graduation to ladniejsze slowo. Osobiscie nie uzylabym slowa 'improve', w polaczeniu z 'education' brzmialoby nienaturalnie.

Improve my qualifications, to tak, ale improve my education to juz niebardzo.

a jeszcze mam pytanie zeby sie upewnic.. kiedy uzywamy np I had chosen, a kiedy i have chosen?

Ja sie na teorii znam jak kura na pieprzu... ale ogólnie ja uzylabym to w ten sposób: I had gone shopping before i have had my dentist appointment. I have gone shopping today. Yesterday I have seen a movie. I had had my haircut the other day.

I have chosen to study medicine because I found the course interesting. I had chosen to study linguistics, but then I have chosen to study mathematics.

with a lot OF goals for the future

generalnie w każdymz daniu jest błąd ,pa