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My two friends, Ania and Kamila, work at a food shop. For them, this work is boring. Moreover, there aren't a lot of clients. They work in the village. They are not satisfied, because they earn little and they have to work far from home. I think that this work is not interesting. I think that there are many more interesting jobs, for example a to be a secretary. This would create many possibilitiese (opportunities?) and offer a better pay. For this profession, a person needs to be competent, independent, but first of all nice to other.

Kilka poprawek. My two friends, Ania and Kamila, work at a food shop. For them this work is boring. Moreover, there aren't many clients. They work in a village. They are not satisfied because they earn little and they have to work far from home. I think that this work is not interesting. I think that there are many more interesting jobs, for example being a secretary. This would create many opportunities and offer a better pay. For this profession a person needs to be competent, independent, but first of all nice to others.

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