angielski - pomocy!

Witam, czy ktoś z Was byłby tak uprzejmy i sprawdził mi czy to, co napisałam po angielsku jest w miarę sensowne pod względem językowym? Bo ja jestem kompletna noga z angielskiego, w szkole średniej miałam inny język, a teraz zachciało mi się na starość studiów i muszę ślęczeć nad tym...Z góry dziękuję :) I think that the transplantation is a good solution for the accident victims. Often transplantation is the way to safe human life and it gives the opportunity to normal functioning in society. In my opinion, the government and charities should be start the campaign, because is important that people known something about transplantation and they want to be organ donors. It seems to be people have a problem to accept that after their death their body will be destroyed, but we should think about help the other people. Realising this is the task of the church and the authority of ethics. Besides I thing that the government should give some money from research about transplantation, in order to reduce the risk of complication during the operations.

a koło chuja mi to lata, to że ktoś nie dbał o swoje ciało a ma pieniądze, nie znaczy że dostanie ode mnie coś, moje ciało i zrobie z nim co będę chciał,

jest sporo błędów gramatycznych, ale ja nie mam już dziś siły robić poprawek, sorry :( może ktoś inny ;)

dzięki za odpowiedź, przynajmniej wiem, że muszę się jeszcze pogłowić dzisiejszego wieczoru :)

podnoszę - nikt nie pomoże? :(

napiszę tylko to co na pewno wiem że jest źle ok?

I think that the transplantation is a good solution for the accident victims. Often transplantation is the way to safe human life and it gives the opportunity to normal functioning in society. In my opinion, the government and charities should be start the campaign, because is important that people known something about transplantation and they want to be organ donors. It seems to be people have a problem to accept that after their death their body will be destroyed, but we should think about help the other people. Realising this is the task of the church and the authority of ethics. Besides I thing that the government should give some money from research about transplantation, in order to reduce the risk of complication during the operations. often- spr czy na pewno na początku zdania powinno być functioning - jest takie słowo? should be start- komletna bzdura, powinno być should start. because of importance albo because it IS important to people KNOW po co n na końcu? give some money FOR

I think that the transplantation is a good solution for (the) accident victims. IT IS OFTEN A way to safe human life and the opportunity to FUNCTION NORMAL in society. In my opinion, the government and charities should (be start) the campaign, because IT is important that people KNOW MORE about transplantation and they want to be organ donors. It seems THAT people DON'T ACCEPT that after THEY DIE their body will be destroyed, but THEY should think HOW TO help OTHERS. REALIZING THAT this is the task of (the) church and the authority of ethics (???). MOREOVER I THINK that the government should SPONSOR A research about transplantation, in order to reduce the risk of complication during the operations. W NAWIASIE CO USUNAC

ale tak ogolnie to slaby tekst

it it important for people to know

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Ja maturę zdawałam 7 lat temu z niemieckiego, a teraz mnie wrzucili od razu na b1 (gdzie po anielsku znałam może 10 zdań ;))