Pomoc w angielskim - z góry dziękuję

Witam potrzebuję Waszej, małej pomocy w przeanalizowaniu mojej pracy i wyeliminowaniu drobnych błędów, które z pewnością praca posiada. Z góry dziękuję i mam nadzieję, że znajdą się tutaj osoby kompetentne. "Hi Anna, I write to you because I will study in London. I am very happy and I wait with impatience. I have not where to live and I need Your help. Will you help to find me flat I which will rent in time studying? I arrive to London in next week on Sunday because I be gave at humanistic studies. Flat should be in centre and possess kitchen, bathroom, television set and computer, I would want also in order to flat possessed two rooms. Price can not cross 250 pounds monthly. Are the costs of maintenance in London is large, or student from Poland has chance to find work? I thank You for help and I have hope, that you will find for me something. I greet and I wait on our meeting."

Hi Anna, I write to you because I will study in London. I'm very happy and I wait with impatience. I don't have any place to live and I need Your help. Will you help me to find a flat which I'll rent in time studying? I'll arrive to London in next week on Sunday because I be gave at humanistic studies. Flat should be in centre and possess kitchen, bathroom, television set and computer, I would like also that flat has two rooms. Price can not cross 250 pounds monthly. How about the costs of maintenance in London , are they large? Is any chance that student from Poland can find a work? Thank You for help and I hope, that you will find something for me. I greet and I wait on our meeting."

*in the time mozesz uzyc during

dzięki wielkie za pomoc naprawdę!

Drugie lepsze ale też z błędami.

no błędów tu jest od cholery zaczynając od czasów a na kolokacjach kończąc... i mówię tu o tej \"poprawionej\" wersji...

to napiszcie jej bardziej poprawnie a nie krytykujecie. pomoglem na tyle co umialem:(

"Hi Anna, How are you? I would like to let yo know thatI will be studing in London. I am very happy and I can't wait! I have nowhere to live and I was wondering if you could help me. Could you help finding me flat which I will rent during my course? I am arriving to London next week on Sunday. I will do humanistic studies. I need a 1 bedroom flat located in central London with kitchen, bathroom, TV and computer. I can't pay more than £250 a month. Is living in London very expensive? Do you think that I will be able to find any student job? Thanks a lot for your help and I hope you could find something for me. Hope tou see you soon, take care.... Imie tutaj A tak nawiasem mowiac za 250 nie ma szansy na znalezienie nawet poj pokoju w centralnym Londynie.

a czy ja mogę podpiąć się pod tematem i prosić o sprawdzenie poniższego opisu obrazka. In the picture I can see a child in his room. The boy is sitting on a small yellow chair. He has got short blond hair and he is wearing a green sweatshirt and trousers. I think that he is sad because he is not smiling. On the right side of the bed on which it is a car. On the left is a desk and chair At the top of the picture there is a shelf with toys on the wall. I see a window in the background. On the parapet is a flower. Room is nicely furnished. z góry dziękuję

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