anglik do sprawdzenia

Na studiach mam napisac krotkiego e-maila do dyrektora sprzedazy (stosunki kolezanskie) w sprawie wybranej przeze mnie kandydatki na stanowisko menadzera sprzedazy na europe wschodnia i centralna ... Mozecie sprawdzic i ewntualnie cos dopisac od siebie ? prosze sie ze mnie nie smiac, przez 8 lat nie mialam kontaktu z angielkim ;/ Ach tak to jest gdy na stare lata czlowiekowi idzie sie uczyc ;/ jak napisac ? Ona zna jezyk rosyjksi co jest dodatkowym atutem w kontaktach z przedsiebiorcami z europy wschodzniej, gdzie mnostwo osob wlada tym jezykiem. Ona ma koncepcje co do rozwoju firmy, potrafi postawic na swoim, jest kreatywna. Dear Liz, We recently interviewed three candidates for this position. We have decided to appoint young polish Barbara Szarmach. I will briefly describe the candidate’s strengths and explain the reasons for our decision. Barbara was born 30 years ago in Poland. She is very strong personality, energetic and confident. She finished secondary school with Diploma in Marketing. She worked for Fast-Track as a sales representative since leaving school. Barbara has had the best sales results of the team during the last five years. She has a good knowledge of computing. Otherwise she know Polish and Russian fluently. Her English is good in vocabulary but not very fluently. I think that he will very good Sales Manager on Central and Eastern Europe in your company. Take care, Eliza, Head Hunter

choc jest troche bledo. jesli czegos nie wylapalm to sorki, ale troche sie spiesze a chce pomoc Dear Liz, We have recently interviewed three candidates for this position. We have decided to recommend Barbara Szarmach. I will briefly describe the candidate’s strengths and explain the reasons for our decision. Barbara was born in Poland, she is 30 years old. She has a very strong personality, energetic and confident. She graduated a secondary school with Diploma in Marketing. She worked for Fast-Track as a sales representative since leaving school. Barbara has had the best sales results of the team during the last five years. She has a good knowledge of computing. She speaks Polish (her mother tongue) and Russian fluently. Her English is good in vocabulary but not fluent. I think that she will be a very good Sales Manager on Central and Eastern Europe in your company. Take care, Eliza, Head Hunter