Angielski...pomoc

Mam do napisania list do kolezanki o wakacjach. Moglibyscie sprawdzic czy nie ma zadnych bledow :) ? Dear Monica, How are you ? I'm fine and I hope you are well too. Thans for your letter. I'm sorry I haven't written for so long time but I was really busy. I'm writting to let you know how I spent my holiday as I promised. As you know I and my parents were In Barcelona by two weeks. We stayed in Vincci Maritimo Hotel not far away from beach. We had really nice rooms with a big balcony. I cannot complain about accomodation. There are a lot of things to see and places to visit, so It's not possible to get bored. I visited many famous places but the most interesting and worth of seeing were Sagrada Famila, Gaudi's Park Guell and Picasso Museum. As you know I'm into art so seeing these places was incredible. You also need to know that Barcelona never sleep. I went to clubs and pubs every night and danced to earlly morning. Many hours I spent on beach too. I enjoyed this city. I met many new friends there. One of them was tourist from England. His name is John. I met him in Ice Bar when I bought some drinks. He thought that I am native Spanish girl. It was a little bit funny when he tried to speak Spanish to me. We kept in touch until and of my holiday. I came back home one week ago. I'm missing Barcelona. I have got plans to visit Madryt in next year. I'm in love with this country. Anyway, I have to finish now. Hope to hear from you. Take care, XXX

Nauczyciel ci sprawdzi błędy :P

In Barcelona by two weeks mi sie pasuje

not far away from beach, może lepiej near?

4 powinnas dostac.

to ma być bez tego by tolko .... in Barcelona two weeks ?

one week ago, poprostu week , bez one napisz

małe błędy ja bym 4 postawiła

ok:) dzięki a poza tym jest coś jeszcze zle ?

http://www.ang.pl/ Masz tutaj forum takim jak ty tam pomagają

np. never sleeps a nie "sleep" i podobne

podobne, czyli ? Mozecie wskazać mi te bledy? To nie jest na ocene ale chce miec poprawnie napisane zeby czegos sie nauczyc :)

angielski - to niech ci nauczyciel wyjaśni, jak chcesz się nauczyć :-o

w tym problem, ze mamy beznadziejna nauczycielkę :-o

no ale chyba zna zasady gramatyki? lepiej niz przeciętny kafeteriusz

teoretycznie zna, ale praktycznie nie za bardzo :-O Czasem robi mega glupie bledy na lekci , a mature mam za rok :-o A na cafe sa chyba ludzie ktorzy np studiowali anglistykę

Dear Monica, How are you ? I'm fine and I hope you are well too. Thans for your letter. I'm sorry I haven't written for so long time but I was really busy. I'm writting to let you know how I spent my holiday as I promised. As you know I and my parents were In Barcelona two weeks. We stayed in Vincci Maritimo Hotel near beach. We had really nice rooms with a big balcony. I cannot complain about accomodation. There are a lot of things to see and places to visit, so It's not possible to get bored. I visited many famous places but the most interesting and worth of seeing were Sagrada Famila, Gaudi's Park Guell and Picasso Museum. As you know I'm into art so seeing these places was incredible. You also need to know that Barcelona never sleeps. I went to clubs and pubs every night and danced to earlly morning. Many hours I spent on beach too. I enjoyed this city. I met many new friends there. One of them was tourist from England. His name was John. I met him in Ice Bar when I bought some drinks. He thought that I am native Spanish girl. It was a little bit funny when he tried to speak Spanish to me. We kept in touch until the end of my holiday. I came back home week ago. I'm missing Barcelona. I have got plan to visit Madryt in next year. I'm in love with this country. Anyway, I have to finish now. Hope to hear from you. Take care, XXX sa jeszcze jakies bledy ?