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jest to opis osoby I want to describe someone, who is very important person in my live. This person is my english teacher- mr. Zomojski who has learnt me when I was twelve. Recently, when was in a supermarket, I see him and all my memories were brought back. Mr. Zamojski is in his mid-fourties. Althought four years have passed since I left schoool mr. Zamojski not change at all. His long black hair makes his look very wiseness. With his big smile he looks much younger than he really is. Althought he is not young he hasn't got any wrinkles. He has big blue eyes and small nose what makes him very handsom men. Often he were a jacket and blue jeans. MR. Zamojski is not only good-looking person, he is very good teacher. I admire him becouse he can extend hobbies and becouse his respect to problems young people. Becouse of him I want to be english teacher too.He is very wise not only in language but in history, geography and sience too. the most important thing is his relation to other people who trick him. I never forget mr. Zamojski becouse I would love to be the same poeople who he is. Thanks to him I want to change myself and be a good people who can be exemplar to other people

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I want to describe someone, who is very important in my live. This person is my english teacher- mr. Zomojski who has taught ( nie moze byc lernt ) me when I was twelve. Recently, when I saw him in supermarket all my memories came back. Mr. Zamojski is in his mid-fourties. Althought four years have passed, since I left schoool mr. Zamojski hasnt change at all. His long black hair makes him look very wiseness. With his nice smile he looks much younger than he really is. Althought he is not young he hasn't got any wrinkles. He has big blue eyes and small nose. what makes him very handsom men. Often he were a jacket and blue jeans. MR. Zamojski is very good teacher. I admire him becouse he can extend hobbies and he respect to problems young people. Becouse of him I want to be english teacher too.He is very wise not only in language but in history, geography and sience. the most important thing is his relation to other people who trick him.

I will never forget him becouse I would love to be as goog as he is. Thanks to him I want to change myself and be a good one who can be exemplar to other people