poprawi ktoś moje błędy?

In this year, on summer holidays, I was on the camp with my friends. We lived in the middle of the forest in the old, grey and wet tents. We didn't have beds, showers, toiletes and hot water. When we wanted to drink or eat something hot (warm?), like a tea for example, we had to make it on a fire-place. One night we slept under the naked sky but it started to rain and we had to come back to our camp. We were walking through the dark, silent night almost 2 hours! We felt so relieved when we came back to the camp because we were very frightened. We had spent on camp two weeks before we came back home. We were very happy becouse we could take a shower or bath, sleep on our beds and eat something "normal". Będę wdzięczna za poprawę moich błędów :)

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=One night we were sleeping - długa czynnosc przerwana krótszą powinna byc w czasie continuous -naked sky-nie wiem czy można tak nazwać gołe niebo, powiedziałabym raczej "outside tents" -for almost two hours -we had spent two weeks on camping -sleep in beds -hot moze byc

-because no ale oczywiscie nie jestem pewna czy mam racje ;]

we lived mozna by profilaktycznie zamienic na we stayed

i sleep IN our beds a nie ON our beds.

tak powinno byc BECAUSE

i nie TOILETES, tylko TOILETS

reszta chyba ok

a no i chyba at a camp a nie on ;] ale sie wkrecilam w temat pozdro