angielski list o praktyki

Hej, piszę właśnie maila do firmy PR o praktyki, wiem że treściowo i strukturalnie jest dobrze bo poradziłam się już, ale chcę się upewnić co do angielskiego. Może mi ktoś potwierdzić, czy gramatyka jest w porządku? Dzięki! Good morning, My name is ..., I'm a second year Public Relations student at University ..., looking for an internship between May and July. I received your e-mail address from ... . As a PR student, several times was I preparing, as case studies, promotion and crisis management campaigns for companies such as Dove, Stella McCartney or BP. Apart from that, as one of the final projects on my first year I prepared a promotion campaign for University ... among Polish students, using social media. Some of these were individual, others were group projects. Outside of the university, I am working on promotion campaign for one of the largest music workshops in Poland, to take place in August 2011. However, most of that were simulations, and I've never had an opportunity to find out how a real PR agency works. Therefore I'm looking for a place where I could be among PR professionals on a daily basis for a few weeks, to gain those key skills that only a professional environment can give me. I would be really grateful for an opportunity to do an internship in a consultancy like Speed Communications, I believe that it's creative, friendly working environment would be very beneficial, as I think that good team work and support is key to efficiency in PR. If there is any possibility of getting an about month long internship at Speed Communications between May and July, I would be grateful for considering my application. I've attached my CV. Kind regards, ...

Good morning- ja bym napisala Dear Sir/Madam, My name is ...- to tez jakies dziwne , , I'm a second year Public Relations student at University ..., looking for an internship between May and July. I received your e-mail address from ... - moze I found out about your company at www.jobsearch.com and am very much interested in an opportunity to work in such succesful institution/firm . As a PR student, several times was I preparing-I WAS PREPARING ale ja bym hapsiala I HAVE BEEN PREPARING , as case studies, promotion and crisis management campaigns for companies such as Dove, Stella McCartney or BP. - to troche nie za ladnie napisane. rozumiem ,ze to byly twoje ''assisgnments '' na uniwekru zeby stworzyc ze wszystkie campaigns itd.????? Apart from that, as one of the final projects on my first year I prepared a promotion campaign for University ... among Polish students, using social media. Some of these were individual, others were group projects. Tesz m isie nie podoba jak to jest napsiane, i przed wszystkim nie napsialas CO SIE Z TEGO NAUCZYLAS???? jakie umiejetnosci musialas uzyc.... Outside of the university, I am working on promotion campaign for one of the largest music workshops in Poland, to take place-moze commencing in August 2011. However, most of that were simulations - znowu zle, and I've never had an opportunity to find out how a real PR agency works- never had an opportunity to gain PRACTICAL experience. Therefore I'm looking for a place where I could be among PR professionals on a daily basis for a-BEZ A few weeks, to gain those key skills(jakie skills - wypisz) that only a professional environment can give me. I would be really grateful for an opportunity to do an internship in a consultancy like Speed Communications, I believe that it's creative, friendly working environment would be very beneficial, as I think that good team work and support is key to efficiency in PR- to jest SUPER!!!. If there is any possibility of getting an about month long internship at Speed Communications between May and July, I would be grateful for considering my application. I've attached my CV. Dodaj jeszcze kiedys mozesz przysjc na ewentulane interview i ile dni w tyg. chcesz pracowac, czy jestes chetna pracowac za darmo? Kind regards,- Yours sincerely??? Sorry za literowki ;-)

aha ,nie napisaalas dlaczego interesujesz sie PR i w czym jestes DOBRA- co wniesiesz do firmy????

jak mi dasz maila to ja ci wysle swoj ;-) to moze bedziesz w stanie cos sobie ukrasc ;-)

sorry zle przczytalam tutaj: As a PR student, several times was I preparing, as case studies, promotion and crisis management campaigns for companies such as Dove, Stella McCartney or BP. moze-during my studies/course at the uni I have been preapring, as case studies, promotion and crisis management campaigns for companies such as Dove, Stella McCartney or BP.

sie nameczylam a autorka uciekla.