tekst po ang - po raz ostatni proszę o pomoc :P

czy mogłby mi tktoś sprawdzić jeden akapit po ang? Podobno jak pisze za bardzo tłumacze słowo w słowo , teraz staralam sie pisać i myslęc "po angielsku ". BYłąbym wdzięczna za wszelkie uwagi S ignificant changes in our lives To sum up, making the costume jewellery has many advantages. Many people claim that jewellery making has changed their lives. These changes are connected with personality traits, for example: - Making items of the bead allowed some people to find their place and to accept own style. With it you can also combine with its own uniqueness, for interest and getting used to the fact stand out from the crowd -Jewellery is also a personal style that is always created individually by each person. -Artistic jewellery can help to be proud of our achievements. What is more, the creators became more assertive and started to properly value items. - Jewelry making increased their self-confidence and helped to overcome shyness - All changes, which makes jewelry in life of its creator, acts as a healing therapy for the soul - the man is more happy and become more open to others - With the creation of jewelery, by contributing their time, heart, effort, he or she is learning to further patience and precision. The author draws attention more to detail and quality,not the quantity