Sprawdzi mi ktoś zadanie z angielskiego? To dla mnie ważne. Dobrze napisalam?

I work on week days, but I study every weekend in a secondary school. In the past I attended at a Hotel Technical School. I have not enough time for pleasures like walking in the forest and meeting with my friends. I spend a lot of time on learning. I have no special interests, once I collected postal stamps but I don't do it now. Now I'm doing everything that I have time to do. Generally I like to listen a music - like most of us. In the evenings I'm watching TV or reading a book. Also I like going to the cinema or to the theatre. I like to long travel very much. I'm always dreaming about a journey to Majorka Island by plane, but my boyfriend think is a bad idea. He thinks that traveling by plane is very dangerous, but I'm not afraid or flying , I like challenges. In my life the most important thing is family and friends. They stand by me at every moment. I feel that I would not be able to get around without them in difficult moments. I don't like to be alone when I don't have people to talk to. I'm afraid of darkness. I go to sleep only when the light is turned on. Generally i don't like talk a lot about me, I like to listen to other people when they talk about them selves.

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meeting with my friends - moim zdaniem powinno być bez with In the evenings I\'m watching TV or reading a book - I watch, I read Also I like goingto the cinema or to the theatre - i like going..., too. I like to long travel very much - coś tu jest źle (I like long-lasting travels)

themselves pisze się razem

Dziękuję bardzo. A reszte mam dobrze tak?

I have no special interests - I haven't got any special interests

I'm always dreaming about - ja bym dała I was always dreaming

I have no special interests - I haven't got any special interests 2 formy poprawne!

Now I'm doing everything that I have time to do. - Now I do everything what I have time for (jeżeli dobrze zrozumiałam co chcesz napisać.

a to jak 2 poprawne, to przepraszam :)

I work Monday to Friday. I study every weekend in a secondary school. In the past I used to go to the Hotel Technical School. I have not enough time for pleasures like walking in the forest and meeting my friends. I spend a lot of time studying. I have no special hobbies. I used to collect stamps but I don't do it anymore. I do what I have time for...so I like listening to the music - like most of us. In the evenings I watch TV or read a book. Also I like going to the cinema or to the theatre. I like traveling very much. I always dream about a journey to Majorka by plane, but my boyfriend thinks it is a bad idea. He thinks that traveling by plane is very dangerous, but I'm not afraid of flying , I like challenges. My family and friends are most important in my life. They stand by me all the time. I feel that I would not be able to cope with my problems if they were not there. I don't like to be alone - when I don't have people around me to talk to. I dont like darkness. I go to bed only when the light is on. Generally i don't like talking a lot about me, I prefer to listen to the others.

I don't do it now a nie I'm not doing now?

Generally I like to listen a music - like most of us. In the evenings I'm watching TV or reading a book. Also I like going to the cinema or to the theatre. I like to long travel very much. I'm always dreaming about a journey to Majorka Island by plane, but my boyfriend think is a bad idea. He thinks that traveling by plane is very dangerous, but I'm not afraid or flying , I like challenges. In my life the most important thing is family and friends. They stand by me at every moment. I feel that I would not be able to get around without them in difficult moments. I don't like to be alone when I don't have people to talk to. zmieniam I like listening to music -like most of us. In the evenings I watch TV or read a book.I like also going to the cinema or to the theatre. I like long trips.I've always dreamt about a journey to Majorka by plane but my boyfriend thinks it's a bad idea. I'm not afraid of flying by planes.I like challenges. My family and friends are the most important in my life.

I work from Monday to Friday and study at secondary school every weekend. Also, I attended at Hotel Technical School in the past. I don't have enough time for relax, but in my free time I like walking in a forest and meeting with friends. Moreover, I care about good marks at school, so I can spend many hours preparing for classes.

heh... teraz już nie wiem jak mam pisać :-) Już to wszystko połączę :-)

Treść wypowiedzi słaba stylistycznie i gramatycznie. Jeśli chcesz to dokończę swoją wersję.

jeśli możesz to będę bardzo wdzięczna :-) Teraz to już się pogubiłam co mam pisać :-)

Ogólnie to nie chcę tego skracać bo muszę nauczyć się tego na pamięć i przez 3 minuty opowiadać :-)

I have no special interests, the school is more important than hobbies. I can only write that I collected postage stamps a few years ago. Furthermore, I like listening to music, especially dance and rock.(;) ) In the evenings I usually learn, watch TV and read books. I also love going to the cinema or to the theatre from time to time. What is more, I really enjoy long travelling. In the future I would like to go to Majorka- a beautiful, tropical island. I wish to go there with my friend by plane but he advises me against it. He claims that travelling by plane is very dangerous. I'm not afraid of flying, so I will persuade him. Family and friends are the most important things in my life. I know that they support me all the time. I wouldn't be able to manage with a lot of problems without them. Finally, I'm afraid of darkness. I can fall asleep only when the light is turned on.

Dziękuję bardzo :-)