Moje wypracowanie z anglika. Pomozecie mi poprawic błedy?

I think, that private schools are much better than state schools. A lot of people are belief that if you are in private school, you don't have to study, you always have a good marks and you can do what you want. But it is not true. Two years ago i had to choose between this two schools and i choose state school. it wasn't a good decision. I've got a good friend in private school, and I can see that she have to work hard for her grades. They have possibility to learn in small groups- they can learn more because the teacher devote them more time and then learning is more effectic. The teaching staff is better. They treat students different than teachers in state schools. Private schools offer student high level of education. They have eight hour english classes in the week. Another importand point is that they have better facilities. For example in "normal schools" on IT lessons students don't have their own computer and they have to schare it with the other. This type of school offer also many trips abroad and entertainment. Finally, young people think that in Private schools people are spoilt and snobbish but it's a myth. I have a few friends in private school and they are really great and nice. Of course you can find several unfriendly people but they are everywhere. In state schools too. Jestem na poziomi pre-intermidiate ale chyba ta wypowiedz nie jest za fajna :P Kurcze no nie umiem po angielsku wyrazic tego co chce napisac ale jesli mozecie to pomozcie mi poprawic bledy bo napewno jest ich duzo ;D thx :)

masz sporo bykow ale nie chce mi sie ich poprawiac

A lot of people believe a nie " are belief"

Az tak zle? ;D Kurwa a pisalam to przez 2 godziny :P

Napisze ktos? ;>

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I think, that private schools are much better than state schools. A lot of people BELIEVE that if you are in private school, you DO NOT have to study, you always ACHIEVE good marks and you can do what you want. But it is not true. Two years ago i had to choose between this TWO TYPES OF SCHOOLS and i choose A state school. HOWEVER, it WAS NOT a good decision. A GOOD FRIEND OF MINE ATTENDS A private school, and I can see that she HAS to learn hard for her grades. STUDENTS have THE possibility to work in small groups- they can learn more because TEACHERS SPEND with them more time and then learning is more EFFECTIVE. The teaching staff is better. They treat students in A DIFFERENT WAY than teachers in state schools. Private schools OFFER HIGH level of education. THERE ARE EIGHT HOURS OF ENGLISH CLASSES WEEKLY. Another IMPORTANT point is that they have better facilities. For example in "normal schools" DURING COMPUTER CLASSES STUDENTS DO NOT have A computer FOR THEMSELVES and they have to SHARE it with the OTHERS. This type of school OFFERS also many trips abroad and entertainment. Finally, young people think that in Private schools people are spoilt and snobbish but it is a myth. I have a few friends in private school and they are really great and nice. Of course you can find several unfriendly people but they are everywhere. In state schools too.

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