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My best frien is Eryka. She is teenager and lives in Kraków, but in future she want moved to Franch and buy small house, 'somewhere over the rainbow'. Eryka is very pretty girl and she has classic beauty. She has long, curly, gold hair, sometimes comb in plait with big ribbon. Her eyes is fair blue and her skin is pale. She is of medium height and slim. She likes romantic clothes: long dress and skirt, sweater and flowery blouse. She wears a lot of jewellery and high heels - to lokks at taller. Eryka's the best music is classic, but she hears rock or RnB too. She dances ballet, plays piano and she is crazy about theater and opera. Eryka never watches tv - she prefer books. She is shy, but przy swoich znajomych robi się mad alnd talkative. She is very creative, funny and kind person.

trochę błędów i zżerasz przedimki, nie chce mi się poprawiać

Jako, że zadałaś sobie trud i napisałaś SAMA :) sprawdzam: My best friend is Eryka. She is a teenager and lives in Kraków, but in the future she wants to move to France and buy a small house 'somewhere over the rainbow'. Eryka is a very pretty girl, in fact, she is a classic beauty. She has long, curly, golden hair, sometimes worn in a plait with a big bow. Her eyes are light blue and her skin is pale. She is of medium height and slim. She likes romantic clothes: long dresses and skirts, sweaters and flowery blouses. She wears a lot of jewellery and high heels - to look taller. Eryka's favourite music is classical, but she listens to rock or RnB, too. She is aballet dancer, plays the piano and she is crazy about the theatre and opera. Eryka never watches tv - she prefers reading books. She is shy, but when with friends she tends to be mad alnd talkative. She is a very creative, funny and kind person. Nie zmieniałam za bardzo, bo w koncu to miało być napisane przez poczatkujaca uczennicę. :)

She is a ballet dancer - napisało mi się łącznie.

1- My best friend's name's Erica. 2-a teenager 3-in the future 4-she wants to move and buy a small house 5- has a classic 6-sometimes brushed/combed in a plait with a big ribbon 7-a long dress and a skirt, a sweater and a flowery blouse ( ja bym to napisała w liczbie mnogiej) 8- to looks taller 9-Eryka's favourite music.... 10- she listens to rock... 11-she has ballet lessons.... 12- she prefers books 13- She is a shy girl, but when she meets friends, she gets crazy and talkative. 14- a kind person. PRZEDIMKI LEŻĄ.

Bardzo wszystkim dziękuję;*

Fakt, she IS a classic beauty jest dobrze

poniżej masz już gotowe poprawione My best friend is Eryka. She is a teenager and lives in Kraków but in the future she wants to move to Franne and buy a small house, 'somewhere over the rainbow'. Eryka is a very pretty girl with classic beauty. She has got long, curly, golden hair, sometimes she wears a plait with a big ribbon. Her eyes are fair blue and her skin is pale. She is of medium height and slim. She likes romantic clothes: long dresses and skirts, sweaters and flowery blouses. She wears a lot of jewellery and high heeled shoes in order to look taller. Eryka's best music is the classic one but she listens to rock or RnB too. She dances ballet, plays the piano and she is crazy about theatre and opera. Eryka never watches tv - she prefers books. She is shy, but przy swoich znajomych robi się mad alnd talkative. She is very creative, funny and kind person.

widze że zjadłam ost zdanie ale już CI ktoś wyzej dobrze przetłumaczył:)