KTO Z WAS UMIE PERFECT ANGIELSKI?

i jest na tyle dobry zeby mi pomoc? tu jest krotki tekst, i chodzi tylko o to zeby wskazac bledy.. musze to oddac na dzis, i na prawde nie wiem czy jest to dobrze napisane , chodzi o gramatyke I took care about all project and assigned work for everyone. My tasks were Front page, Introduction paragraph, table, Analysis, photos, and described interview with Morten Skytte Olesen. I worked hard with our project, but also I had a lot of fun. I have new experience, and I had the pleasure to know owner from Aafart Odense. I am really satisfied because everyone of my group worked really hard.

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I took care about all project and assigned work for everyone. My tasks were Front page, Introduction paragraph, table, Analysis, photos, and described interview with Morten Skytte Olesen. I worked hard with our project, but also I had a lot of fun. I have new experience, and I had the pleasure to know owner from Aafart Odense. I am really satisfied because everyone of my group worked really hard. all projectS (czy chcesz powiedzieć o wszystkie projekty czy o jeden wtedy whole project) table - jedna tabela? I've descriped the interview with.. to get to know owner of i jeszcze kilka jest ale drobne

described oczywiscie (z p to literówka) ogólnie ciężko poprawiać, bo nie wiem co chciałaś wyrazić np. tu I worked hard with our project, but also I had a lot of fun. I have new experience, and I had the pleasure to know może I've worked i have been working i have new experience - i got new experience

jak dla mnie troche niedojrzale napisane, pomijając błedy składniowe, to słownictwo mało profesjonalne, a jeśli profesjonalne, to sprawia wrażenie wyszukanego ze słownika i dodanego do kontekstu.

wiec to ma wyglada tak??? -> I took care about whole project and assigned work for everyone. My tasks were Front page, Introduction paragraph, table, Analysis, photos, and I have described interview with Morten Skytte Olesen. I have worked hard with our project, but also I had a lot of fun. I got new experience, and I had the pleasure to get to know owner of Aafart Odense. I am really satisfied because everyone of my group worked really hard.

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I took care of the whole project and assigned work for everyone. My tasks included front page, introduction paragraph, tables, photos and data analysis. I also covered an interview with Morten Skytte Olesen. I worked hard but also had a lot of fun. I gained new experience and had the pleasure to know the owner from Aafart Odense. My group worked very hard and I am really satisfied with the results.

sie wykazywac angielzczyzna tylko znajomoscia tematu, to ok, zrozumieją. Uzywasz na ogól Past Simple - ale tez trudno powiedzic, czy odpowiada to stanowi faktycznemu- nie znam realiów. Moze czasem lepszy byłby Perfect czy Past Continuous - ale nie wiem, co dokladnie chesz popowiedzic. Moze npisz tekst po polsku, to ktos madry Ci przetłumaczy. Ja sie nie czuje na silach , moge zrobic b lad - Nie jestem na tyle perfekcyjna w ang. choc n oko bym to troche inaczej napisała..