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Byłabym wdzięczna za poprawienie błędów : Christmas in my home Few days before Christmas Eve I and my sister decorate Christmas tree, while our mom decorate the whole home Chistmas's ornaments. My dad always go to the shops and buy nessecary things like fishes, flours, dumplings etc. Usually I and my mom prepare Christmas dishes because my dad and sister doesn't like cook. She deal with cleaning the house. On Christmas Eve mornig I and my Familly go to the cementery to light a candle to our (bliskim). Then we pick up to gradma. Christmas supper we usually start about 5 p.m. First we divide the wafer, then I or my sister read excerpt of bible. Finally we sit down to the table and eat our favorite dishes od twelve. On our table is carp, dumplings, borsch, plum soup, vegatables and other tasty food. After supper we drink coffee and eat cake. Mom usually bake cheesecake, gingerbread and friutcake. Then we sing a few Christmas carols. After thath one of us give/distributes gifts from under Christmas tree. We spend this evening listening to Christmas carols, talking and watching Christmas films. In the end of Christmas Eve I and my familly go to shepherdess. First day of Christmas (pierwszy dzien swiąt) we eat Christmas breakfast (uroczyste,swiateczne śniadanie). But dinner we eat with my dad's parents. We spend together almost all day. On last day od Christmas me , my dad, mom and sister stay in home, watching tv and go for a walk. That's how I spend Christmas in my home.

tylko prosiłabym abo to zrobiły anglistki a nie jakieś nudzące sie podszywami głupawe dzieciaki z gimnazjum :P

dziewczyna trzecia osoba liczby pojedynczej wymaga 's' na końcu czasownika. Poza tym - błąd na błędzie

domyslam się wiec proszę o poprawienie :(

sama se poprawiaj wiedza kosztuje :)

Co z tego, że ktoś poprawi? Lepiej oddaj z błędami = nauczyciel poprawi i się poduczysz. Ciekawy tekst: " stay in home, watching tv and go for a walk" ;) No i na początek: https://www.etutor.pl/pytania-jezykowe/pytanie/20159-at_home_at_the_house_in_the_house.html

ale to ma byc na ocene... nie mozecie zrobic czegos bezinteresownie?

napisano ci żeby pododawać s i coś nie widać poprawek na co czekasz? aż ktoś napisze?

"my dad and sister" - to dwie osoby a ty traktujesz to jak liczbę pojedynczą popraw

poprawilam u siebie w tekscie , a nie tu.

a czas jest dobry?

Few days before Christmas Eve my sister and I decorate Christmas tree, while our mum decorates the whole house with Christmas ornaments. My dads responsibility is the shopping and my sister cleans the house . My mum and I prepare Christmas dishes because my dad and sister don't like to cook. On Christmas Eve morning I and my Familly go to the cementery to light candles in honour of our deceased. Then we pick up my gradma. Christmas supper usually starts at about 5 p.m. First we divide the wafer, then I or my sister read excerpt of bible. Finally we sit down at the table and eat our favourite twelve dishes . On our table there is carp, dumplings, borsch, plum soup, vegatables and other tasty food. After supper we drink coffee and eat cake. Mum usually bakes cheesecake, gingerbread and fruitcake. After that we sing few Christmas carols and one of us give/distributes gifts from under the Christmas tree. We spend this evening listening to Christmas carols, talking and watching Christmas films. At the end of Christmas Eve we all go to shepherdess. On the first day of Christmas (pierwszy dzien swiąt) we eat Christmas breakfast at home (uroczyste,swiateczne śniadanie), and go for dinner to my dad's parents. We spend together the whole day. On Boxing Day ( Drugi dzien swiat tak sie nazywa) , my dad, mum , sister and I stay home,we watch tv or go for a walk. That's how I spend Christmas at my home.

Dziękuje bardzo :)

:D "go to shepherdess"

to jak jest pasterka?

midnight mass, jeśli juz, bo sheperdess to taka co pasie owieczki :D

ok, dzięki :P