Do tych, ktorzy znają DOBRZE ANGIELSKI --- prośba o pomoc

Proszę, czy moglibyście poprawić mi ten liścik. Co prawda piszę z prośbą o pracę, ale nie jest to list oficjalny, więc bardziej chodzi mi o stronę gramatyczną, bo pewnie narobiłam sporo błędów. Aha, tam gdzie wstawiłam kropki, są nazwy, więc nie chodzi o to, że nie wiedziałam co wpisać :P Z góry bardzo Wam dziękuję :) Hello ........ Here ....... I was working in ......during last summer. I’m writing to you because this summer I would like to come back to work in .....and I want to ask is there opportunity that you employ me ? I can come between 1-5 of June but I can stay only to 25 – 30 September , not longer, so I don’t know doesn’t would be a problem. I remember our last conversation and how you told me that you’re not sure will you stay in....but I really hope so that you are still there . If you prefer I can call you, just let me know, please. Thank you in advance for the anserwe. Best regards

I worked at ......during last summer. I’m writing to you because I would like to come back to work at .....this summer. I would like to find out if there are any free vacancies ? I am planning on comming to (.np UK...) between 1-5 of June but I can stay only till 25 – 30 September I don’t know if that would be a problem. I remember our last conversation and how you told me that you’re not sure that you will stay at.... but I really hope that you are still there . Please let me know if you prefer me to call you. I look forward hearing from you. Thank you Best regards

Dear ……. I hope you remember me I was working at ………………………during last summer. I’m not sure if you still work there but I hope you do. If so, I’m writing to you because wanted to ask you if there are any openings for a job this summer. I would really appreciate working with you again. The only problem is that I’m coming to UB on the week of June 1st and I can unfortunately stay only till the end of September. If you prefer I contact you by the phone, just let me know. Thank you so much for your help and I hope I'll hear from you soon and that will be a good news :) Best regards….. moze tak

Ojj, ale jesteście genialne, aż nie wiem, którą wersję mam wybrać :):) Naprawdę super. Bardzo, bardzo Wam dziekuje !! !! !! :) :)