Jest tutaj ktoś dobry z angielskiego? Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie zadania.

Długie to ale dla mnie bardzo ważne. Będę losowała jedno z 3 pytań i muszę to wcześniej napisać. Te wszystkie 3 zadania miały być w czasie Past Simple i łagodnie przejść w present perfect, nie wiedziałam dokładnie jak to zrobić. Jeśli komuś się chce to bardzo proszę o poprawienie. 1. As you know, I travel recently a lot of. I had the opportunity to fly to the Spain. I lived In the large hotel, near the beach. In the evening, I went to tour the city. I met Mary there, the girl, which was several years ago with us on the trip in the Greece. Do you remember ? Mary changed very much. If she did not notice me, I would not get to know her. After the short conversation, Mary proposed me the dinner in the exotic restaurant. We sat down near the window and after the longer consideration, we chose gazpacho as the main dish, on the dessert we chose crema catacostam. I was surprised the quick service, the waiter was very nice. I asked him for something to the drinking. After the moment, when the waiter brought the drink, I thanked for the service and praised the interior decorations of the restaurant, because I liked it very much. I asked for the bill and paid, leaving the tip for the waiter. We went outside and Said goodbye. Mary gave me one's picture, as a souvenir. She change very much. Is the truth? 2. Recently I was on concert in London Hyde Park. The concert took place on the free air. The music band "Linkin Park" was the attraction of the evening. This is the band of rock music. I went on the concert accidentally. Being on the trip in the London, I lived with the girl who won two tickets on the concert in the competition of the musical newspaper. She did not have with who to go, so She invited me. Although I do not like rock music, but I agreed. The musicians was late a bit, but when went out on the scene, the concert began. I was never on the concert of the rock music band. I did not think that I ever would like the music of this type. However I liked this kind of music. Everybody have fun, a lot of people came on this concert. It simply was wonderful. During the concert I took several photos. You can look at them. 3. One day I came back home by bus. The day was in the middle of the week, It was crowded in the bus. It seemed me the whole time that some man pulled me the bag. I wasn't concerning these because I thought that this did involuntarily. I decided to get out from the bus earlier because I wanted to make shopping for the dinner. I chose the products which were necessary for me and I went to cash desk. It turned out that I did not have the wallet. I thought that I had left him in the work. I wanted cal to my boss and ask him to bring me the wallet but it turned out that I do not have mobile phone to! I got to know that the man had robbed me in the bus! I went to the police station. I notified the theft. They made the memory portrait and they placed the thief pictures in the neighbourhood. The police knew suspicious man. He earlier made the theft already. I have his picture. If you see him, call to the police Z góry dziękuję.

kochana, mnostwo bledow ale ja nie mam czasu

Kurcze, długo nad tym siedziałam :( Dziękuję Ci, może ktoś inny będzie miał czas i ochotę na poprawienie?

Pierwsze przeczytałam...dopatrzyłam sie kilku błędów, drugie i trzecie przeleciałam okiem...ale tam wszędzie jest TYLKO past simple, a przeciez miał być tez present perfect!

as you know, i've travelled a lot recently. (musi byc uzyty p.perfect bo wyraz recently jest typowy tylko dla tego czasu.)

hmm mało tego - gdzieniegdzie pasowałby EWIDENTNIE past continuous albo past perfect...

"I was never on the concert of the rock music band. " zmień na - I have never been to the concert of the rock music band

It was crowded in the bus - zmien na - The bus was crowded, albo There was a crowd in the bus.

i had the opportunity to fly to spain.

met Mary there, the girl, which was - the girl, WHO...

i lived in a big hotel near the beach.

If she did not notice me, I would not get to know her. - ładnie zrobiony drugi tryb...z tym, że nie mam pewności, czy "get to know" to jest rozpoznać...ale jak sprawdziłaś w słowniku, to ok

i the evenings i went to paint the town red. uwierz mi to bedzie dopiero zaskakujace dla nich, to jest idion i oznacza ze mialas fun kazdego wieczora na miescie .

As you know, I travel recently a lot of. - bez OF na koncu

Present perfect może być ale nie musi.

rozpoznac to jest recognize

idiom ;p

Mary proposed me the dinner- lepiej" proposed me to go for a dinner... raczej propose łączymy z TO....

Już poprawiam :)

She change very much. - She HAVE CHANGED

proposed me to go for dinner, bez a dinner.

podobne zdanie jest wczesniej, ze mary changed very much, tam ma byc present perfect, czyli znow ze MARY HAS CHANGED, wyzej machnelam sie, oczywiście HAS a nie HAVE

Is the truth? - a co to ma znaczyć?:) Może Isn`t that truth?

Załączam sprawdzony pierwszy tekst, już są poprawki, więc możesz tylko przekleic :) 1. As you know, I travelED recently a lot. I had the opportunity to fly to Spain. I lived in the large hotel near the beach. In the evenings I visitED the city. I met Mary there. Mary was the girl WHO was several years ago with us on the trip to Greece. Do you remember her ? Mary has changed very much. If she had not noticed me, I would not had recognized her. After the short conversation Mary proposed to eat the dinner in the exotic restaurant. We sat down near the window and after longer consideration, we chose gazpacho as the main dish; for the dessert we chose crema catacostam. I was surprised BY the quick service, the waiter was very nice. I asked him for something to drink. After a while, when the waiter brought the drink, I thanked for the service and praised the interior decorations of the restaurant, because I liked them very much. I asked for the bill and paid it, leaving the tip for the waiter. We went outside and said goodbye. Mary gave me her picture as a souvenir. She changed very much. Is the truth?

Being on the trip in the London, I lived with the girl - ja bym tu dała "i have been living", ew. "i was living" ale to juz inne czasy..jednak bardziej mi pasi;)

kolega zrobił tam trzeci tryb warunkowy...myślałam nad tym...bo w końcu wszystko dzieje sie przeszłości;) ale nie byłam przekonana;)

Poprawiony tekst 2. Nie pisz She z dużej literyl. I nie stawiaj the przed London, Spain, England etc. 2.Recently I was on the concert in London Hyde Park. The concert took place on the free air. The music band "Linkin Park" was the attraction of the evening. This is the band of rock music. I went to the concert accidentally. When I was on the trip to London, I lived with the girl who won two tickets on the concert in the competition of the music newspaper. She did not have anyone to go with, so she invited me. Although I do not like rock music, I agreed. The musicians were late a bit, but when they went out on the scene, the concert began. I have never been to the concert of the rock music band. I did not think that Iwould ever like the music of this type. But eventually I liked this kind of music. Everybody had fun, a lot of people came to this concert. It was simply wonderful. During the concert I took several photos. You can look at them.

no i pan fiutasek załatwił wszystko za jednytm zamachem:) czuję się zbędna hehe, pozdrawiam:)

dsgg no własnie powinien być trzeci okres. I ja nie jestem kolega tylko koleżanka :P Niech was nick nie zmyli :)

Dziękuję Wam bardzo Ja już poprawiam tylko trochę się pogubiłam :)